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This Cloudy Jug

A Sonetto Haikai Renku

by

Moira Richards and Norman Darlington



full moon rising - let's share this cloudy jug of fresh-pressed juice
tunes from Puccini to warm the cool night air
the smoothness of a column in Carrara marble
she signs with a flourish with her silver pen

a tanka concealed beneath the maid's silken kimono
oh yes the heat your hands cup my desire
!! gunshots from the grassy knoll... where were you in '63?
like bible days the sun still standing still

an early thaw but snowbones lie stubborn on the mine
I'd wish the pegasus to fly me away
things fall apart the centre cannot hold mere anarchy

favouring the child with a birthmarked cheek
unknown sadnesses and joys in the spring of mother's life
the stream tugs its ribbon of fallen blossom



First published in Crannóg 2008

The sharp-eyed among readers will have noticed the term 'sonetto' in the subtitle. This is a type of renku popular among some modern Japanese groups, which notionally incorporates certain attributes of the Petrarchan sonnet, while maintaining the unthemed mandala-like character of renku.